03-08-2013, 01:23 PM
There are a lot of good things going on, but they don't really fit together. I feel like you didn't really do thumbnails for this. And then, if you used references, you only used bits and bobs. The head of the bird is cool but it's angle doesn't work with the body, the wings are at a strange angle, like those planes that can rotate their wings. Also, consider Jon's posture. Having both legs evenly bent like this is awkward unless you are about to sit or to do squats (give it a try.) I suggest you especially seek out wolf references, its chest and head are way too wide for how high they are and it looks like it has only two legs.
So yes, I look at this and think:"Hey, cool clouds, cool wolf teeth, cool breastplate" but they are not working together to make the whole image stronger.
So yes, I look at this and think:"Hey, cool clouds, cool wolf teeth, cool breastplate" but they are not working together to make the whole image stronger.
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