03-13-2013, 11:58 PM
Just finished some comps. Basically my time warrior is a WW2 fighter pilot from the past and is accompanied by a robot co-pilot sidekick to help him learn and use the futuristic technology of the jet. If I'm not getting the message across in these comps:
1. They are being pursued and are taking fire from enemy aircraft. The background is a futuristic city.
2. Same premise as 1, but they are further from the city and the robot is doing repairs on a damaged wing mid flight.
3. No pursuit on this one, Just them flying & enjoying scenery. Maybe I would add a sunset in the back ground.
4. Same premise as 1 & 2 but with a different angle and the robot firing back at the pursuing aircraft.
I'm very likely going with 4, but if anyone has any suggestions of what I can add or change, or which elements I can take from 1, 2 & 3 to enhance 4, will be much appreciated.
1. They are being pursued and are taking fire from enemy aircraft. The background is a futuristic city.
2. Same premise as 1, but they are further from the city and the robot is doing repairs on a damaged wing mid flight.
3. No pursuit on this one, Just them flying & enjoying scenery. Maybe I would add a sunset in the back ground.
4. Same premise as 1 & 2 but with a different angle and the robot firing back at the pursuing aircraft.
I'm very likely going with 4, but if anyone has any suggestions of what I can add or change, or which elements I can take from 1, 2 & 3 to enhance 4, will be much appreciated.