03-14-2013, 07:25 PM
Hey Monkeybread, just some things to (I hope) improve your piece.
Overall she needs to find her feminine side, she has too much width in the upper torso, and above the waist (one of the things to make her more feminine) needs to be narrow. The eyes are too inclined and small and the head has a weird shape and needs a little more hair, the right leg needs a touch.
I made a little paint over "fixing" all these ideas and added some highlights here and there...
Hope it will help!
Keep drawing!
Overall she needs to find her feminine side, she has too much width in the upper torso, and above the waist (one of the things to make her more feminine) needs to be narrow. The eyes are too inclined and small and the head has a weird shape and needs a little more hair, the right leg needs a touch.
I made a little paint over "fixing" all these ideas and added some highlights here and there...
Hope it will help!
Keep drawing!