03-15-2013, 12:20 AM
I have been looking at this piece since you put it up for crit. Being a fan of Game of Thrones i took a keen interest in this piece. I love the wall behind the Jon, if you know the series the wall gives a nice additional visual reference. My biggest concern with the piece is the emphasis on several different focal points (Jon, Wolf, Full moon) narrow it down to one and push the others back or just don't paint them with as much detail. The other even more critical piece is the anatomy of the wolf, the wolf in your painting has REALLY long legs, grab visual reference and make the wolf anatomically correct.
I did a super quick paint over adjusting composition and changing the focal points.
I changed the image to grey scale and added an overlay layer for quick color.
Hope this helps
Eric
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