03-21-2013, 01:29 PM
IgorIv, good work so far. I hope you don't mind but I made some changes.
1) Composition needs a stronger value pattern (Refocusing the eye to the head's in our case.)
2) Consistent lighting source(s) (Or as consistent as is necessary.)
3) Depth added through 3D forms (Perspective)
4) Direction and motion consistency (Top right to bottom left. Although I feel the composition is a bit unbalanced now, I might fix it by moving some values around.)
5) Weapon and armor design updates.
6) Bigger hands
7) Crop body (Removed the leg because it would not be visible at this zoom level)
Anyhow, I hope it helps. Keep up the great work.
1) Composition needs a stronger value pattern (Refocusing the eye to the head's in our case.)
2) Consistent lighting source(s) (Or as consistent as is necessary.)
3) Depth added through 3D forms (Perspective)
4) Direction and motion consistency (Top right to bottom left. Although I feel the composition is a bit unbalanced now, I might fix it by moving some values around.)
5) Weapon and armor design updates.
6) Bigger hands
7) Crop body (Removed the leg because it would not be visible at this zoom level)
Anyhow, I hope it helps. Keep up the great work.