My current portfolio...

[ChantalFournier]

syria07.jpg, Clean up and a Touch of chaos are your least successful images. I suspect they also are the oldest. The others have good things going for them and other stuff that's less successful, but they are generally better. It would take a long time to crit them all, maybe you can choose the one that you think is best or that shows the direction your want to take and post it here for a more in depth crit.