02-12-2012, 06:13 PM
Congrats Zaphk!
The last nitpick I could make, is for You to compare your final to my paintover focusing on the girl and her nearest surroundings in terms of value. Your doesn't stand out from the environment enough to fit the focal point reqirements.
Just to make it clear, I'm not saying this to sound smart. I just want to help You as much as I can.
I'm looking forward to seeing your future pieces! Keep it up!
The last nitpick I could make, is for You to compare your final to my paintover focusing on the girl and her nearest surroundings in terms of value. Your doesn't stand out from the environment enough to fit the focal point reqirements.
Just to make it clear, I'm not saying this to sound smart. I just want to help You as much as I can.
I'm looking forward to seeing your future pieces! Keep it up!