03-24-2013, 05:15 AM
Hello there!
I'm a new user and currently, I'm really trying to make my art become better.
I hadn't done a lot of paintings in a while and decided to make one again.
So I made this one: http://twitpic.com/c719wz
But I really wasn't satisfied with how it looks.. And I only worked about 4 hours or something on it. So now, I'm remaking the painting (also in a different pose). I like it a lot more now.
But I'm still searching for critiques and if you can, a quick paintover, so I know what I should improve. I'll try to make this my best work yet. I would be very thankful for everyone who could help me :)
Here's the original concept of the painting.
http://i53.tinypic.com/11ryvzt.png
And here is how the new one looks so far
![[Image: epoI1sk.png]](http://i.imgur.com/epoI1sk.png)
Sry for any grammar mistakes, but English is not my native language. Dutch is :p
I'm a new user and currently, I'm really trying to make my art become better.
I hadn't done a lot of paintings in a while and decided to make one again.
So I made this one: http://twitpic.com/c719wz
But I really wasn't satisfied with how it looks.. And I only worked about 4 hours or something on it. So now, I'm remaking the painting (also in a different pose). I like it a lot more now.
But I'm still searching for critiques and if you can, a quick paintover, so I know what I should improve. I'll try to make this my best work yet. I would be very thankful for everyone who could help me :)
Here's the original concept of the painting.
http://i53.tinypic.com/11ryvzt.png
And here is how the new one looks so far
Sry for any grammar mistakes, but English is not my native language. Dutch is :p