Dark Caster painting

[ChantalFournier]

This is the kind of image that lives or dies on the anatomy. I suggest you find someone who can stand like that and photograph them. The other option is to have someone photograph you. If all else fails, act out the pose and what the guy is doing and look at yourself in the mirror and think about how your body parts relate to the other. I think the way the torso, pelvis and thighs connect together have important problems.