03-26-2013, 05:38 AM
Well you're still in the beginning of the composition so it's kinda hard to go deep in the critique, but let me try! So... I feel like the guys face feels kind of overexposed, what I feel is that the woman is kind of too bright for the composition, you could play with different lightsources to light the picture and make it pop, but in order to POP as you want, you gotta have a background or at least a sugestion of what it's going to be like, this way you can work the values better! Post the next steps so then I can help you more!