03-28-2013, 03:29 AM
Very vivid--this I like, and the flower and the bee-boy have a lot of personality. The stump-monster's expression could be a bit more expressive, though. He's a little ambiguous, just staring fixedly ahead--if he supposed to be angrily in hot pursuit, maybe you could make his expression more aggressive?
It makes sense that the mountains and grasses are blurred, but I feel like the stump-monster should be crisper, especially his hand that is in front of him, which is fairly close to us (the viewers).
Finally, the layout of the clouds behind the flower is bugging me because they part right around the flower's head, which doesn't look natural.
Hope that was helpful--keep up the good work!
It makes sense that the mountains and grasses are blurred, but I feel like the stump-monster should be crisper, especially his hand that is in front of him, which is fairly close to us (the viewers).
Finally, the layout of the clouds behind the flower is bugging me because they part right around the flower's head, which doesn't look natural.
Hope that was helpful--keep up the good work!