04-01-2013, 11:12 PM
Some really nice stuff here man! Your lighting is pretty great, but there is one thing that I think will help a ton. Grab an airbrush/softbrush and use softlight/overlay/multiply and work your biggest forms, the large gradients. Something you can try in like 5 mins on each of your images. That one thing is holding you back, because its otherwise pretty tight. Hope that helps :D!