04-12-2013, 03:21 PM
(04-07-2013, 07:23 PM)Olphelia Wrote: Hi Zachary,
I think what I like the most about jjeeaann's paintover is the winding pathway that directs the viewers eye to what might be beyond. At first glance at your recent piece I'm looking at the foreground torch first. You can't really darken it to the point of being a silhouette since it's lit. Also, atm the torches are favoring the left side of the path. Just my first impressions here :)
Thanks! That is true.. I just don't want the viewer to follow the path too much, because the path is quite straight and is in the very center of the image. Might just make it not quite as bold as jjeeaann's paintover. Totally agree with you on the foreground torch. I'll figure something out... maybe even get rid of it. We'll see. Opps.. didn't realize all the torches were on one side. Thank you for pointing that out! I'll try to work on it more if I can find some time.. Keep the C&C's coming!