Petes book of Progression

[BenFlores]

thanks for coming to my sketchbook pete :) keep studying and applying, youre definately on the right track. and for some criticism , i see your lines are scratchy, loosen up a bit and try to get those lines with one good stroke. just seconding what unlimited bacon said. avoid painting individual strands of hair. group the hair up,imagine like they are ribbons and maybe find a brush to help you out. anyways have fun with it i hope i helped some there :D