04-19-2013, 10:08 PM
(04-19-2013, 08:57 AM)Alchimi Wrote: Hey Ward217,
Nice mood here. Like the loneliness/peaceful feel it conveys for the lone character...
My 2 cents:
If you want to push that piece, maybe you could start by pulling out some fore/middleground on the ground. The rock area seems overall a little too flat... (unless it's the feel you wanted).
Is that ships in the sky? You could maybe try to push the closest one a bit more near the upper left hotspot, composition wise...
Cheers!
Thanks very much!
Yes you are very right there, it all seems to blur a bit too much together and is pretty uninteresting, cheers.
Yes those will be spaceships as its a futuristic city, will see what I can do with the ship.
Thanks a heap thats been very helpful :D