04-23-2013, 02:15 PM
@Gangsta: Sweet gesture and proportions as always dude. Full o' life...though I do wonder what that near arm is doing..I can't tell if it is foreshortened or straightened and pointed out of the canvas.
@Yolo: Those storymind vids are neat indeed. Has given me some food for thought, and a different way of being able to analyse the story a little better to see where there may be empty spots has been useful in making changes to my synopsis.
Also I have decided to do a proper script. Even though I don't have a huge amount of dialogue (there will be some) the narration of my story is going to be very different from the text of the synopsis. It will be more about showing through the narration and not telling, so I do need to make sure I nail the salient parts in the plot to be understood. Currently on page 6 and about a quarter of the way through, so it's looking like it will be a 20+ pager.
@Yolo: Those storymind vids are neat indeed. Has given me some food for thought, and a different way of being able to analyse the story a little better to see where there may be empty spots has been useful in making changes to my synopsis.
Also I have decided to do a proper script. Even though I don't have a huge amount of dialogue (there will be some) the narration of my story is going to be very different from the text of the synopsis. It will be more about showing through the narration and not telling, so I do need to make sure I nail the salient parts in the plot to be understood. Currently on page 6 and about a quarter of the way through, so it's looking like it will be a 20+ pager.