05-16-2013, 09:06 AM
I guess it's probably explained in the story, but I don't get "aliens" from either the ship or the figures. I think you're missing an opportunity to push that idea by just dropping one of their silhouettes in the green light of that open door. As far as the ship goes, it would help if it was floating above the house, maybe the aliens could be repelling down some ropes or something. Right now it just looks like part of the house.
The only other thing I see is that the image seems a little flat. The background looks like it's on the same plane as the foreground, you're not showing the house in three dimensions, and nothing runs off of the page to suggest space beyond this house.
The last thing, and it might be intentional if it's a children's story or something, are the green eyes and mouth. Sort of looks like a Cars kind of thing. He's really happy about the invasion/abduction. Lol.
The only other thing I see is that the image seems a little flat. The background looks like it's on the same plane as the foreground, you're not showing the house in three dimensions, and nothing runs off of the page to suggest space beyond this house.
The last thing, and it might be intentional if it's a children's story or something, are the green eyes and mouth. Sort of looks like a Cars kind of thing. He's really happy about the invasion/abduction. Lol.