Struggling with composition

[Neal_Albert]

No, you are not harsh, you are right. This one just started out as a random painting and then I worked on it a bit. It started taking shape and now I want to finish it, I never thought to do a full on illustration. You are right though, I should have done proper research before starting a piece, but I liked this one from just doodling out of boredom so I went with it.

Thanks for your help and I will put it to use :)