05-24-2013, 01:09 AM
Cool design idea. Just a couple of crits. I think you've decided on a walking pose, but because of the way the legs are positioned it looks more as if he's standing while stretching his foot upward. Also the values aren't helping to show the form. For lighting and rendering in general, it really helps to be able to accurately draw every single form you've got going on in a piece. If you can't draw it, you can't actively describe it, thus you can't light/render it out. It's why the more I study the more I'm starting to realize that being a good draftsman is, above all else, the most important thing. So keep drawing constantly and studying your constructions! Oh, and I posted the answer to your question in my SB. Keep it up!