derA's tome of doodling
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(05-24-2013, 08:59 AM)Budgie Wrote: hello! I really dig the pencil in your first post. it's awesum ^^
I do notice some things in the wip in post #8
-the left shoulderpad has a bit of a perspective error, it looks like its more at the front of the chest than the right shoulderpad
- the front foot is too small. (and flat) take a look at some pictures of the frontview of some feet, and you'll see what I mean
-the neck area still looks a bit flat, you might wanna take a closer look at that
I hope that's been helpfull (:
cya!

Yes I completely agree, the right side is the second run through on the rendering and placement, so I haven't gotten to that part yet on the left one, planning to remove it completely and redesign it as it looks like a half-eaten rock at this state:P
Feet is one of my many weak areas in painting so I'll definetly look into that, thanks for the tip!
Now that you mention it I also see the issue with the neck, will try to fix that:)
that was extremely helpful and I appreciate you taking the time to give me feedback!

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derA's tome of doodling - by derA - 05-23-2013, 12:30 AM
RE: derA's tome of doodling - by derA - 05-23-2013, 01:54 AM
RE: derA's tome of doodling - by derA - 05-24-2013, 03:18 AM
RE: derA's tome of doodling - by janvonfrosta - 05-24-2013, 03:21 AM
RE: derA's tome of doodling - by derA - 05-24-2013, 03:25 AM
RE: derA's tome of doodling - by iCi - 05-24-2013, 03:33 AM
RE: derA's tome of doodling - by derA - 05-24-2013, 03:36 AM
RE: derA's tome of doodling - by derA - 05-24-2013, 06:20 AM
RE: derA's tome of doodling - by derA - 05-24-2013, 08:44 AM
RE: derA's tome of doodling - by Budgie - 05-24-2013, 08:59 AM
RE: derA's tome of doodling - by derA - 05-24-2013, 09:11 AM
RE: derA's tome of doodling - by Budgie - 05-24-2013, 09:42 AM
RE: derA's tome of doodling - by derA - 05-24-2013, 09:30 PM
RE: derA's tome of doodling - by MrFrenik - 05-25-2013, 06:59 PM
RE: derA's tome of doodling - by derA - 05-25-2013, 09:07 PM
RE: derA's tome of doodling - by DrPyrox - 07-05-2013, 12:43 PM

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