05-28-2013, 08:32 AM
Eduardo, yeah, the anatomy has been bothering me. I'll get on to that. As for the values, i always seem to mess them up, especially when i start with color! I'll get right on that.
aks9, So, I guess i got confused by my own composition :D I really wouldn't have noticed these angle problems on my own, thanks! And as for the clouds and the tribesmen, i was told to watch out for tangents, and that they were hard to miss. Serves me right, i didn't notice that either.
So, i think i'll go back to work on this one, but first here are the thumbnails i did for this. As you can see, i chose the 2nd, but then i though the 1st was also nice. So i started that one, as a 2nd version of sorts, and i think it's looking better! It's very different though...
aks9, So, I guess i got confused by my own composition :D I really wouldn't have noticed these angle problems on my own, thanks! And as for the clouds and the tribesmen, i was told to watch out for tangents, and that they were hard to miss. Serves me right, i didn't notice that either.
So, i think i'll go back to work on this one, but first here are the thumbnails i did for this. As you can see, i chose the 2nd, but then i though the 1st was also nice. So i started that one, as a 2nd version of sorts, and i think it's looking better! It's very different though...