06-10-2013, 06:21 PM
Hey man, nice work...should be a kick ass piece. I have a little to add about composition. I felt the line of rotting dudes down the bottom created a little bit of a block in the comp, and really it was the guy on the left end that was bothering me..So i substituted dead guy for prickly bush to mirror the other prickly looking trees elsewhere as well as to get some overlap with the main guy and add even more stuff to point at him (not that you needed it, but more can't hurt)
I also added a bit of atmospheric fog behind one of the figures and the tomb just to get a bit more separation between elements going on...oh and added a smaller figure lurking to add to the sense of there being more of these. The previous comment about embellishing the figure was a good idea, so I did a tiny bit just to see what that would be like...you may even want to give him some accessories...smoking lanterns or magical raising spell or something. Hope that helps.
I also added a bit of atmospheric fog behind one of the figures and the tomb just to get a bit more separation between elements going on...oh and added a smaller figure lurking to add to the sense of there being more of these. The previous comment about embellishing the figure was a good idea, so I did a tiny bit just to see what that would be like...you may even want to give him some accessories...smoking lanterns or magical raising spell or something. Hope that helps.