06-14-2013, 11:54 PM
hey man,
really great update since I last dropped by. Keep rocking :)
as for crits:
the far back hand on your character (the ghoulish thing) is so close to the bg, that I read his staff as his hand on the first look. and something about his pose is not quite right (to me at least). Maybe his torso is twisted too much or you could show a little of his neck. and lastly the point of view could be more dramatic. at his moment he seems to be running towards me, which is great, but maybe it would be stronger to use an upshot at him.
but thats all I can see.
oh and I am an mid-twenty-self-teaching-dude too (only that I am working full time for almost no money - yup that sucks ^^)
really great update since I last dropped by. Keep rocking :)
as for crits:
the far back hand on your character (the ghoulish thing) is so close to the bg, that I read his staff as his hand on the first look. and something about his pose is not quite right (to me at least). Maybe his torso is twisted too much or you could show a little of his neck. and lastly the point of view could be more dramatic. at his moment he seems to be running towards me, which is great, but maybe it would be stronger to use an upshot at him.
but thats all I can see.
oh and I am an mid-twenty-self-teaching-dude too (only that I am working full time for almost no money - yup that sucks ^^)