06-16-2013, 06:26 PM
hey! real nice work, your studies seem to be coming along great. your imagination pieces are cool, i like the zelda one and the photo study of the girl with the tech suit is indeed awesome : )
this last piece is great! i really like the red/blue going on, and her armour design with the little wings. real nice work capturing the facial expression and shape of her head/hair
for a crit on it, the pose might look stronger if the sword were rotated slightly in her hand, so that the long edge of the blade (the hand-guard, long-wise) were parallel to her arm. how it is now, to me, it doesn't look like she's really got a good grasp, she couldn't strike someone with it if holding it like that.
this last piece is great! i really like the red/blue going on, and her armour design with the little wings. real nice work capturing the facial expression and shape of her head/hair
for a crit on it, the pose might look stronger if the sword were rotated slightly in her hand, so that the long edge of the blade (the hand-guard, long-wise) were parallel to her arm. how it is now, to me, it doesn't look like she's really got a good grasp, she couldn't strike someone with it if holding it like that.
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