06-17-2013, 05:08 PM
Ooo man, I'd like to see that red clock sketch finished, I think it would look pretty cool. For a crit on that voodoo guy I think the composition with those two branches in the foreground and two trees in the background, it's a little bit too symmetrical and centered. He has a cool dynamic pose so I think something like a swirly composition or a dutch tilt or something would have added some extra in-your-face-ness to it. But nice sketchbook! It's pretty obvious you're working really hard and making progress. It's quite delicious
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