My finished works
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Whoa. That's one is painted very well. But I think there is some design problems. Helmet seem to be very advanced, made mainly by bent forms. His hands are very weird, I can't find any rational usage of them, except digging. Or if you wanted to show them as unfinished, interior structure should be visible. And the chest... advanced hands, helmet, technology, and a box. It don't look interesting, more like a toy or something. But if it have to be a box, look at other designs. You can model this form to be way more interesting. Some examples what I mean:
http://fc00.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2012/3...5m424w.jpg
http://th04.deviantart.net/fs71/PRE/f/20...3yf4u9.jpg
http://fc03.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2013/1...648oq7.jpg
And the legs. He seem to be able to walk only forward or backward. The last thing is shiny scientist. There is no way he lights like a candle, if he is only illuminated. You should simplify him.
But I love the way you have rendered this one. Keep it up. And I know, my english is terrible, but maybe you will understand xD
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My finished works - by Defre - 05-04-2013, 01:30 AM
RE: My finished works - by Defre - 06-18-2013, 03:45 PM
RE: My finished works - by Typhon - 06-18-2013, 09:34 PM
RE: My finished works - by Defre - 06-18-2013, 10:13 PM
RE: My finished works - by Typhon - 06-20-2013, 06:23 AM
RE: My finished works - by Defre - 06-20-2013, 04:06 PM
RE: My finished works - by allyhodges - 06-20-2013, 11:42 AM
RE: My finished works - by Defre - 06-27-2014, 11:51 PM
RE: My finished works - by Defre - 10-03-2014, 05:42 AM
RE: My finished works - by rafa zanchetin - 10-04-2014, 09:21 AM

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