Can you critique or do paintover on it , guys?

[Defre]

Wowowowowow! Thank you for paintover! You are absolutely right in your critique . Sometimes I reaaly oversaturate the image. and I like the final image you did because I really can see the foreground , midground and background

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Thank you for this "flow scheme" , I 've never seen it before.
Yeah, maybe this green light in background distracts the viewer. The paintover you did is really good but it is too much empty space above him( as for me)

Anyway , thank yooooou