Zachary McLean's Finished Work

[Typhon]

Thats pretty nice. I like the way you paint, and the rought style of it. Very catchy. But if you want to work as concept artist I think you should define things more. Here is just two guys walking out frome some sort of ruin. Armor is just some shiny stuff, helmet reminds me of Rome armoury, and the title says they are Norse. Completly different type of equipment. In my opinion the design is very unreadable (Proper word for "hard to read"?xD). And the proportions kinda get messed.
It fits more as frame design for a movie or something. The way it is going is very good, but you definetly can pull a lot more from this.