Need Opinion About this illustration

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I kinda second what Greyskill said. These are pretty nice, and I think you've captured the mood of the era you're going for but without context it might have been hard to place them without some obvious signs of nazi occupation.. They also seem like they are panels of a page in a comic rather than standalone pieces so that may work within your format but it's hard to tell without seeing it all together.
I prefer the perspective and architectural tightness of the first image (non eagled) but there isn't a clear focal point really. What's the focus...a blank grey rainy sky...not that interesting. The hotel facade is almost an afterthought. The buildings in the background of the eagle pic are a bit sloppier and could probably be a bit tighter with straighter lines etc and you could maype put a few highlihgts of refracted light through some water drops on the eagle to draw a bit more interest and focus. Hope that helps

great, thanks for your help