06-24-2013, 03:36 PM
Heyo, thanks for the comment and really cool stuff here! Great to see you're working hard and pushing your boundaries, I'm inspired to too now *_*
I think the lighting and clouds are looking better in your WIP piece, but I'm not certain I like the bright white on that smokestack that you've added. To me it feels like it's become too important in the picture and is drawing the focus from the awesome ship. It also made me notice that the smokestack is perfectly aligned with the foreground dude's head, which is a type of tangent and might be taking some depth away from your piece.
Hope that's helpful. Just my two cents, take it or leave it XD I can't wait to see this piece finished!
I think the lighting and clouds are looking better in your WIP piece, but I'm not certain I like the bright white on that smokestack that you've added. To me it feels like it's become too important in the picture and is drawing the focus from the awesome ship. It also made me notice that the smokestack is perfectly aligned with the foreground dude's head, which is a type of tangent and might be taking some depth away from your piece.
Hope that's helpful. Just my two cents, take it or leave it XD I can't wait to see this piece finished!