06-27-2013, 09:55 PM
I love the colours you're using, that's what struck me first. The second thing was that the anatomy on the woman is a bit off, I see that's she twisting at the waist but doesn't look natural, and her boobs and bum look too rounded and 'stuck on'. i suggest getting some reference of that pose, or trying different dynamic poses, she looks a little static for someone being shot at.