06-27-2013, 11:11 PM
Oh man, you just reminded me I gotta start working on my own pitch DX
Nice new sketches! Drawing from fashion is a fantastic idea. I like the style you drew the wizard girl in, really appealing cartoony shapes going on. And oh man I love boots that flare out like that!
Taking a more critical glance at it, the alignment of her eyes looks a off like the left one is too far left, I think if you're going for a "looking at the viewer" then the pupil would be in the same height as the other eye and mostly to the left but with a sliver of the white of the eye on the right. Possibly push the nose more to overlap the far eye. Also maybe make her teeth overlapping the cheek, or have some more space between them and the cheek to show they're inside the mouth, just to add a bit of depth. and definitely use the sleeves of her shirt, boots, and shorts to show more depth, they should be considered ellipses you're looking down or up at. And I miiiight play with the length of her shirt thing to make it a more dominant shape, that's just a suggestion tho.
I guess I wound up doing a drawover.
haha may have gone overboard here hope you don't mind the crits XD I look forward to your next update, and to seeing more about your pitch!!!
Nice new sketches! Drawing from fashion is a fantastic idea. I like the style you drew the wizard girl in, really appealing cartoony shapes going on. And oh man I love boots that flare out like that!
Taking a more critical glance at it, the alignment of her eyes looks a off like the left one is too far left, I think if you're going for a "looking at the viewer" then the pupil would be in the same height as the other eye and mostly to the left but with a sliver of the white of the eye on the right. Possibly push the nose more to overlap the far eye. Also maybe make her teeth overlapping the cheek, or have some more space between them and the cheek to show they're inside the mouth, just to add a bit of depth. and definitely use the sleeves of her shirt, boots, and shorts to show more depth, they should be considered ellipses you're looking down or up at. And I miiiight play with the length of her shirt thing to make it a more dominant shape, that's just a suggestion tho.
I guess I wound up doing a drawover.
haha may have gone overboard here hope you don't mind the crits XD I look forward to your next update, and to seeing more about your pitch!!!