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[Samszym]

Ahhh, I see what were going for now! I completely agree with you about the chest area, I added that shadow in without thinking about the way cloth acts or the character. And I read about that kind of flaw in character design all the time, big fail on my part DX The updated sketch looks much better. Oh, in my image I decided to raise the shoulder that was holding the staff, don't know if you caught that or if you disagreed with that. I didn't mean to mess with the design, I think now I should have just mentioned the problem with the eyes and left it at that.

Thanks for the clarification! I can see how I jumped the gun to correct some things that weren't actually problems, that was actually quite presumptuous of me and I apologize :\ I'll be sure to be more careful about this kind of thing when I do crits! :D