07-02-2013, 03:00 PM
Great start! This looks really cool, I love the dark edges.
The very first thing I noticed is that the woman doesn't seem to have a neck and her face is very small. I recommend getting a few reference pictures to see what parts of her face you would/wouldn't see in that sort of pose.
Also the highlight on the back of her skirt doesn't seem to make sense, the light source is coming from the right, yet it is lit from the left. If you're going for ambient/reflected light it should be much less bright.
The very first thing I noticed is that the woman doesn't seem to have a neck and her face is very small. I recommend getting a few reference pictures to see what parts of her face you would/wouldn't see in that sort of pose.
Also the highlight on the back of her skirt doesn't seem to make sense, the light source is coming from the right, yet it is lit from the left. If you're going for ambient/reflected light it should be much less bright.