07-03-2013, 05:30 AM
I agree with DoubleThink. Also, be careful of the placement of her bun vs the direction of her braids, it looks like it's too far to the right (our right). The drape of her shirt also was better in the original design, it looks a bit mushy right now, and her arm position is a bit awkward, but it could work, if she was the type of person always standing in weird positions being creepy. That said, I'm just nitpicking. This is great work.
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