seeking crit !
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Now that you've added the fairy the light source has changed, it's much stronger than the first version which means the shadows should be much darker. Also I agree with Chantal, the lady has lost the body language she had in the first version, and just be careful with her line of sight, she seems to be staring off into the middle-distance and not really focusing on the fairy.
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seeking crit ! - by gumby - 07-02-2013, 07:56 AM
RE: seeking crit ! - by MissLillyArt - 07-02-2013, 03:00 PM
RE: seeking crit ! - by gumby - 07-02-2013, 11:30 PM
RE: seeking crit ! - by ChantalFournier - 07-03-2013, 05:35 AM
RE: seeking crit ! - by MissLillyArt - 07-03-2013, 08:49 AM
RE: seeking crit ! - by gumby - 07-03-2013, 10:02 AM
RE: seeking crit ! - by gumby - 07-03-2013, 11:21 AM
RE: seeking crit ! - by Ron - 07-03-2013, 11:37 AM
RE: seeking crit ! - by gumby - 07-03-2013, 11:50 AM
RE: seeking crit ! - by gumby - 07-03-2013, 01:33 PM
RE: seeking crit ! - by MissLillyArt - 07-05-2013, 10:17 AM
RE: seeking crit ! - by ChantalFournier - 07-10-2013, 12:22 PM
RE: seeking crit ! - by Tetsuo - 07-11-2013, 03:18 AM
RE: seeking crit ! - by Patrick Gaumond - 07-12-2013, 04:16 AM

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