Character crit please :D
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(07-06-2013, 05:16 AM)Rognoll Wrote: I think that if it was supposed to cover the leg, it should also cover the whole arm, or wave with the wind. That way it looks like some force or wind was pushing it against her body. Maybe that's your idea, if it's so, cool!
Here, I did a quick paintover. What do you think?

Thats a good point, I think that I'm not showing the force enough. I was intending on having it blowing the other way, so that the material is pressing against her arm.
I really like your paintover, thats definitely an option and would be what I'd normally opt for, but i quite like the way that shes shrouded by the cloak in a way, kinda blending in rather than heroic as a pose, and also I found it so hard to get the leg to look natural on our left :/
You are completely right that it looks a bit wrong for it to be over the arm but around the leg, will see if I can push the idea of a wind force and update, thanks :D

(07-06-2013, 05:13 AM)Madzia Wrote: Nice design i like the idea of this non symmetrical armor design :D check only arms length right one looks to be shorter, I would also draw here smaller feet, it will look more feminine :D good luck!

Thanks very much :)
Great spot, thanks a lot will edit both of those- she keeps ending up looking a bit manly so that may help thanks!
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Messages In This Thread
Character crit please :D - by Wardy - 07-06-2013, 04:49 AM
RE: Character crit please :D - by Rognoll - 07-06-2013, 04:54 AM
RE: Character crit please :D - by Wardy - 07-06-2013, 04:58 AM
RE: Character crit please :D - by Madzia - 07-06-2013, 05:13 AM
RE: Character crit please :D - by Rognoll - 07-06-2013, 05:16 AM
RE: Character crit please :D - by Wardy - 07-06-2013, 05:30 AM
RE: Character crit please :D - by DanDussault - 07-06-2013, 06:37 AM
RE: Character crit please :D - by Wardy - 07-06-2013, 08:42 AM
RE: Character crit please :D - by DanDussault - 07-07-2013, 11:27 AM
RE: Character crit please :D - by par gin - 07-08-2013, 01:15 AM
RE: Character crit please :D - by Wardy - 07-08-2013, 07:01 AM
RE: Character crit please :D - by par gin - 07-08-2013, 12:59 PM

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