Finnjamin's book

[Mr. Toodles]

Hey finnjamin I hope your still working on some new stuff. As for your compostions being chaotic, I don't necesarrily agree. Your lights are light and your darks are dark and it reads well, for instance the cloud picture second from the bottom is a great example. However I don't see your forms go in and out of depth. Its all very flat. I would try to work on your two point perspective

Why don't you try to define some forms inside of your darks and lights

and update this dang thing :D