Character Critique

[Walterlicinio]

Hello guys! I'd really appreciate some critique on how to keep rendering this old character I created (I'll figure out the environment later). My goal is to achieve a realistic type of rendering, as with those of Rapoza and Cryptcrawler, but I think I really lack the understanding on how to get this kind of rendering. What I think is that, with these self given assignments, I can learn and apply knowledge at the same time. Halp!

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Also, the steps so far