07-21-2013, 01:39 AM
Hey Ward,
here's a rough attempt at fixing the pose and some of the anatomy.
I think you can stretch the legs quite a bit and put more tension on her back leg to show that she's ready to strike (heel will be off the floor, calf will be flexed,... find some reference!)
As for sexier design. I took a bit off her top. It's usually good to pick the upperbody or lowerbody to show more skin, both isn't really classy anymore. Try and show more of the face, cheekbones, eyes, pretty nose etc. It helps sell a sexier picture. (maybe some hair coming out of her hoody)
Anyway spent too much time painting over it already. Hope it helps!
cya
here's a rough attempt at fixing the pose and some of the anatomy.
I think you can stretch the legs quite a bit and put more tension on her back leg to show that she's ready to strike (heel will be off the floor, calf will be flexed,... find some reference!)
As for sexier design. I took a bit off her top. It's usually good to pick the upperbody or lowerbody to show more skin, both isn't really classy anymore. Try and show more of the face, cheekbones, eyes, pretty nose etc. It helps sell a sexier picture. (maybe some hair coming out of her hoody)
Anyway spent too much time painting over it already. Hope it helps!
cya