07-22-2013, 09:17 AM
wow man
the floating piece is awesome!
super great work on the lighting from the window, and the soft colours. i just love the idea and story in it though. very unique...
my suggestions would be to get some occlusion shadow under the guy's feet where it contacts the ground, and behind the backpack.
the nose and shadow on the girls face look a bit big/strong to me, and it might be good to not make her back foot blend 100% into the background. it might sound minor but i think putting hard edges on her underwear would make it look more realistic too, since it kind of stands out value-wise. great work on the painting and anatomy and everything else tho.
also that starry piece a few posts back is nice
the floating piece is awesome!
super great work on the lighting from the window, and the soft colours. i just love the idea and story in it though. very unique...
my suggestions would be to get some occlusion shadow under the guy's feet where it contacts the ground, and behind the backpack.
the nose and shadow on the girls face look a bit big/strong to me, and it might be good to not make her back foot blend 100% into the background. it might sound minor but i think putting hard edges on her underwear would make it look more realistic too, since it kind of stands out value-wise. great work on the painting and anatomy and everything else tho.
also that starry piece a few posts back is nice
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