Lulus Sketchbook

[Ignatz]

Hi Lulolana. Really like the pink haired lady portrait. The environment piece is cool but I think the composition is lacking something. The first one that you thought was a bit meh I find more interesting because of the overlapping shapes and strong division of fore/mid and background. It's also nicely divided into thirds with the rock face and moon. The second one feels a bit cut in half or in need of some focal point now that you've led our eye down this central path. Discalimer: I'm crap at environments so listen to me a your own peril.