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[Wingal]

The light on her top right (our left) breast is too strong. (ps didnt see the girl even though i was looking at that breast for a good min) It looks like a spotlight is directly hitting it which isnt the case. Also if this is underwater you need alot more dispersion of the lighting. Even the lighting of that magic will not leave such a hard affect on the surrounding area. Also that breast should have a very strong shadow caused by that fish girl. Transition of all the lighting to darkness is way too fast, almost as fast as cell shading(unless thats where you are headed, but still some of the lighting makes no sense even for cell). Where is that light behind her head coming from? Is it the fire? if so that means the light is reaching all the way across her body and hitting there. Which is fine but the way you have it now does not make sense.

Conclusion soften some of the lighting that isn'ta direct spotlight on said surface.
Draw some lights to show where exactly the light is reaching, to help you lay down your values.

keep drawing =)