character concept help

[Novaking]

good day everyone. I was wondering if i could get a crit and/or paintover for this character.

here a bit of background: what i had in mind is that he's some elemental monk that uses ice. a bit of punk teenager and also vagabond atmosphere to him.

any advice would be nice . i don't want to end up rendering to finish just yet

thnxs in advance :)