Colors critiques

[paraloopable]

Hey I livestreamed some feedback for you:

http://livestre.am/4Ax5d

Hi!! thank you for the video answer!
Sorry about the mistake in my post about "the original one", i just pasted the wrong line and so i repeated the same image ._.
here it is the right one [that's the lineart only]
http://sliverofdeimos.deviantart.com/art...-175279446

Usually i'm scared by saturation because, as you can see in the 3rd pic, i can't control it :( but i'll try harder!
I didn't think about the progression of time while camera's moving! i feel so stupid now! I considered the background as a single panel...
Unfortunately i don't have the scripts, i found the inks on DA.

I'm going to use your advices today!

PS
You can call me just "Loop" next time XD i use paraloopable 'cause loop is always taken

thank you, thank you again!