Julius Ebert Sketchbook

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Thanks alot for your crits!
You're definetely right that those background values are still off, deerheadlights. I wanted to render the cathedral thingy anyway, I will remember your crit when I do so!

florentK, thanks for your crit too. The composition is a bit off, I had that thought too, but I won't change the gesture of the girl now. I will try out some other stuff to fill the bottom left corner. Maybe I can figure something out.
The light behind the door and/ or the door half open is a bit too easy imo. Thats the stereotype "mysterious door - whats behind it". But your point on the architecture to use design elements of the headdress is a sweet idea! :)


Here's a portrait of today to not only post text.



Cheerio!