08-28-2013, 11:03 AM
You've got a lot of really cool stuff. In terms of your personal style, it's come a long way. All of your stuff has that really cool flavor that makes it stand out as your own, I'd definitely see myself looking at art on a card, or something and say "That's Lumen's stuff!" Haha.
That one post of the guy holding the girl in the red dress is awsome, it be cool if you were to go back and finish it, there's a lot of feeling/mood that come from it. You've most definitely got a strong grasp of color and form, it shows through in almost all of your pieces. If I could offer a bit of critique, based off of most of your things many of them tend to be loose, some looser than others and look unfinished. You've got a few landscape paintings in here that capture that looseness and still look finished, so you could possibly use some of those as a point of reference.
Great stuff; beautiful works, I'll be coming back to see more. :]
That one post of the guy holding the girl in the red dress is awsome, it be cool if you were to go back and finish it, there's a lot of feeling/mood that come from it. You've most definitely got a strong grasp of color and form, it shows through in almost all of your pieces. If I could offer a bit of critique, based off of most of your things many of them tend to be loose, some looser than others and look unfinished. You've got a few landscape paintings in here that capture that looseness and still look finished, so you could possibly use some of those as a point of reference.
Great stuff; beautiful works, I'll be coming back to see more. :]