Am I on the right path?
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What if the door of the church was open a crack and someone was waving her in, or if you could see silhouettes of archers on the roofs? What if she is following bloody tracks to the door? Maybe there is light coming from only one window and there is a silhouette there. I don't know, you don't have to have two characters fighting to have a story.

Also, the shoulder pad on her right is weird and smaller than the one on the left, it's ok that the pad obscure most of her right shoulder, it's turned away from us.

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Am I on the right path? - by Art.ful - 08-30-2013, 10:44 AM
RE: Am I on the right path? - by ChantalFournier - 08-30-2013, 11:59 AM
RE: Am I on the right path? - by Elmst - 08-30-2013, 01:03 PM
RE: Am I on the right path? - by Mike086 - 09-01-2013, 10:11 AM

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