Seeking crits about comp and ideas for colors

[Lloyken]

Thank you so much monkeybread for doing this ! I really built this piece backward cause first I was trying to make a cool character based on the D&D character sheet of my friend and add his face on it. I had so much fun with it, I began to fully render it before thinking of the composition. I tried then to have it work with the character but it's obvious I failed... Thanks for your tips, I will start again !