Will Warburton's sketchbook

[JakeB]

Latest piece looks solid man, only thing I'd say is you could maybe push the silhouette/pose of the FG dude a bit further, he looks a tiny bit stiff. In the earlier thumb it looks like he's a little more side on and kinda leaning into the comp. (I know it's rough, so I could just be reading it wrong). Think that kind of gesture might work a little better. With his shoulders sorta hunched over, and his sword pointed at the creature to lead the eye. Whatever you decide to do, looking forward to seeing it finished :). The story and the comp are both sweet (although - and I know it's kinda hacky - something in the bottom right, extreme FG, could push the depth a little further)

So yeah, that's a crit, or something. ;) Keep it coming man, the study/apply things are getting better with each post. I should definitely stop pussying out and do some of those lol. Inspiring stuff :).



(Editing this to say I'm loving those black and white sketches you've been doing as well. So cool.)